(1) Who Could Comment Chuan-Guo Xiao?==>"Who Can Evaluate Xiao Chuanguo?" according to Eddie's translation.

(2) Nowadays, Fang dropped out of school and stay at home==> Nowadays, Fang dropped out of school and stays at home

(3) all Zhou-Zi Fangs ==> Fang Zhou-zi

(4) It is not convenient to comment on his own colleagues==>It is inconvenient to comment on his own colleagues

(4) all小芳s==>Little Fang? better not use Xiao Fang

(5) It is expensive after all, if it lasts to long.==>It is expensive after all, if it lasts too long.

(6) all Chinese names are unified as Fang Zhou-zi

(7) The foundation of the operation that Xiao Fang received was the theory of artificial reflex arc, of which the inventor was Professor Xiao Chuanguo at the Xiehe Hospital in Wuhan.==>The operation Xiao Fang received was based on the theory of artificial reflex arc, invented by Professor Xiao Chuanguo from Xiehe Hospital in Wuhan.