The idea is good. The letter is very poorly written.



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送交者: skipper3 于 2005-3-28, 12:17:10:

回答: 自己不签名就算了,还说那些不咸不淡的话干什么? 由 三弦 于 2005-3-28, 11:33:24:

1. Remove everything authority already know: broad statements of pros and cons.
2. Be specific: "单单这十年间积累的科学技术文档,问题解析,实践总结,是一笔巨大的,无从估算的财富" This is your opportunity to score. Go do some research and find out specific numbers and specific examples of how a bbs has helped to solve academic problems. "是一笔巨大的,无从估算的财富" shows the writer is lazy.
3. DON'T WHINE! "所有的水木清华用户,包括清华的校友,都觉得震惊和无奈", "已经成为一部分人的生活方式", "严重伤害了海外学子对祖国母校的感情" these are not arguements.
4. Be sujective. REmove statemenst like "随着水木清华2005年3月16日的对外IP关闭都烟消云散" etc.
5. Stay focused. REmove statements like "甚至打击了一部分人对政府和党的领导的信心,这些都在很大程度上损害了政府在青年学子中的声誉和威信" etc. Don't make threat when you are not in a position to make a threat!
6. Act with discipline, know what you want, understand what they want and be ready to make compromise.



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